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Summer Beach Party Contest by *EcEu:iconEcEu:


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11.11.08 Edit: Added a water line, ad superimposed an image i got of frothy water so it would look more like a hot tub.

This is a contest entry for the Hideout Summer Beach Party Fanart Contest being hosted by ~gunarmdyne

The criteria was to have at least three characters. One from an anime, one from a role playing game, and one original character.

The anime girl i chose was Misa Amane from the anime Deathnote. I used a handy dandy sculpture my brother got from a sideshow collectibles coupon to figure out what she looked like and then drew her in my style.

The game girl i chose was the irresistible Nariko from Heavenly Sword, doing a quick google search came up with some massive images that were great for referencing from.

The original character is my very own Euphoria.


Major challenges i had was solving the damn lighting, there's a couple things going on with the light. first the moon is providing some back lighting so some top right reflected light as in store, second to that is the hot tub lights lighting the girls from the bottom.

Another challenge was getting the point of view to work. The background is actually based on a shot of the bay at my home town, and i didn't want to have it in focus so i could do some depth of field action.

I do admit there are some things that just don't look like what they should in actuality but really, i had nothing to go by so here's my best shot of what i think these things should look like.

the piece itself took pretty long to do

14 hours

PSCS2, Flash, Painter

original size 3000x2400

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:iconcaregan:
well, this is very seasonal.... o.O
:D
i love euphoria's expression ^ ^
:iconguardian457:
I'll trust that the characters look like what they're supposed to (as I've never played Heavenly Sword, and gave up on Deathnote by episode 4 of the series).
I like the texture difference between the bodies and the legs underwater. Lighting also seems pretty good for a night scene. The one thing I notice that strikes me as an error (though it might be intentional) is all of the fence/railing posts are either on the outside of the railing, or have the rail on top of them, except for the post that connects the upper flat with the downward slope, which is fully connected on the inside of the rail.
Other than that, good scene.
:icongunarmdyne:
It's already linked from my journal and I'll have it up on my site when I update tomorrow. Thanks again.

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:icondlshowtime:
A lovely ode to the season of warmth, easy goings and best of all, skimpy outfits. Fantastic work.

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:iconlordsnap:
Other than the fact that no one is tied up (shame), the only criticism I can say, is that there is no demarcation of where the legs enter the water.

I know you make them wavy (sorry for the lack of terminology), which is good, but there should be some "line" or break in the water.

This is, of course, my humble opinion and I am FAR from an artist.

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Girl don't stop that screamin'
You're sounding so sincere
So much beauty
In the tracks of your tears

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:iconcordefr:
It's a nice drawing, especially the enigmatic looking redhead, has gotten my attention. But the physicist in me is screaming, see here: [link]
Also, the tub seems filled to overflowing colourwise, but the girls legs show that it's lower than that.
:icondazandanime:
Wow! bloody youv been busy here!, this is fantastic work man really well! XD you know Im really jelus of you XD!

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:iconeceu:
damn it! damn you physics!! i knew that's what i was forgetting! hmm actually i can't really wrap my mind around how this should look like, next time i hit the hot tub i'll see for real what it should be like. Last night in bed i was also thinking i should have defined the water level in some way, i'll think about how to go about that some more.

thank for the sharp observation mr. corde, these are things i really gotta remember when i try something new.

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:iconeceu:
you know you are absolutely right about that water level thing, i'm going to figure out how i'll make that work right now.

thanks for the comment, i really appreciate it.

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